^^ I would say you are headed in the right direction. The fist thing that jumped out at me was some of the overblown highlights. Most of the white lights are a tad blown. It seems highly saturated but not so much that i dislike it or think it's over done. White balance seems ok. In areas you think it's off and in other areas it seems to be right on. It would be nice to have some distinction between the ground and sky, but it is a night pic after all. A full moon would have probably helped you a lot. Not an easy pic to critique for me. I quite like it.
Let 'er rip.
